Reading Times: 90 mins
Working times on poems: 30 mins
a The pain from within
b from the lacking of food
a burns deep into my skin
b ruining my mood
c I really want a snapple
d preferably on ice
c maybe grape or apple
d that would really be nice
e I never knew how much hunger could hurt
f the fact that i'm in pain
e make me almost want to eat dirt
f making me almost go insane.
g If i could go to the store
g I would buy more and more
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This is genius. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteGreat rhymes but the hunger pains are very descriptive.... wierd
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I've ever seen "snapple" in a poem, but it does indeed rhyme with "apple." Interesting sonnet!
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