Exposition: She's at home thinking before she goes to bed.
Rising Action: She tries to harm herself by trying to overdose because Syd makes fun of her in front of the whole cafeteria.
Climax: She goes to therapy for her eating disorder and suicidal problems.
Falling Action: She stops trying to harm herself whenever there is a problem.
Resolution: She's confident, gets friends, and her gets over eating disorder.
Who's she exactly? Do we get to find out how she developed this eating disorder?? This sounds really interesting!
ReplyDeleteWell your character, and your plot seem very interesting. I mean, intriguing. You should try to add more background though, like is it just what happened in the cafeteria, or is it a lot that has been building up?
ReplyDeleteYour character and story line overall sounds very interesting. I really want to read your short story when it's finished!
ReplyDeleteAzzie, your plot sounds super interesting i hope i get a chance to read it
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